LoZ: The Return pages 17-18

III think I've kept you guys waiting long enough. I'm officially stuck on the next page, and have been since my last update, which was...what, two months ago? Ugh. My baaaaaad.

Here's the next two pages!

Again, This Story Is Not Mine, it's a continuation of my comic adaption of 's masterpiece Legend of Zelda: The Return. I have a request; if you found this fic through me, please do me a favor and leave Rose a review. She deserves it :>

I'm not too happy with these pages. I've been sitting on them for so long, though, I just kinda do nothing but pick them apart. I do have a favorite panel, tho! It's the second one on the top page. I loooove that expression.

Link is a total dork.

And...I think I need to sit down and practice drawing girls D: Malon just isn't turning out the best she could. Granted I have...what, two more pages of her, and then off I go to draw more Brutter? I--I-I mean Bruiser. Totally meant Bruiser.

...maybe I'll go play Jak II before I try on those pages again :>

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