LoZ: The Return pages 9-12

Sorry for all the crappy handwriting D: I just don't have the penmanship for comics.

Again, This Story Is Not Mine, it's a continuation of my comic adaption of 's masterpiece Legend of Zelda: The Return.

But seriously, page 9 is, like, my favorite page yet. And it's damn hilarious taken out of context. Link is such a PRETTY man! Also, who needs backgrounds? I HAVE COLORED PENCILS!

I want you guy's honest opinions though; does the green work? There's such an emphasis in the fic about Link's obsession with his hat and the color green I thought to make a point of coloring those bits, but I'm not sure if it's not just bad-random. And is Bruiser's beard weird in blue? It's naturally brown, but when I thought about it I went "No, brown would be ugly." Maybe I shouldn't knock it 'til I try it. Oh well, live and learn. I'm still having sooo much fun!

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